Reveling under the sky,
Animating the flowing river,
Kneeling down to caress the daisies,
At times,she personifies the ultimate giver.
Making my day a dream,
Amazing me by her sheer words,
Juggling several tasks without fail,
Understanding me like no other,
My endearing friend -
Daunting,brave- up against a rough sail
And do you who she is ?Our very own-
Raka Majumdar......
I could not help but write this acrostic for my dear friend and lovely soul sister Phoenix.
Awaiting your reply....
Lotsa love and more love to Phoenix...
33 comments:
need i say i loved it? i think you already know that... :d i always wanted someone who loves me to write a poem for me.. and im blessed with 3 such friends... yams,harshi and now you...
truly bhagwaan jab deta hai...woh deta hai chapppar pad ke... :)
*hugs*
lots of love.....
@everyone....
just 1 more post to go.. then i return with my usual banter.... no more basking in compliments :D and hopefully i will be in full form... :)
anwesa sis :)...u have done a beautiful post for a awesome lady :)..the poem was just awesome loved...congos to raka and congrats to u to do the post :)...
urs..hemu..
Great poem there. :) Does justice to the wonderful author of this blog. :)
Cheers
beautiful.....Anwesa ur acro is good da..!!!!
Hey Raka,, aapki jai ho!! aapko inna sara pyaar humaari taraf se bhi.. :D
ths sweet :)
kudis anwesa :)
That was sweet. :)
Kisses.
I love acrostics. This one was too good :)
a lovely acrostic dedication :)
nice one Anwesa :)
lovely..piece..
Mast hain yeh bilkul.. raka tu toh hawaa mein udd rahi hogi...
Going by the literary viewpoint - brilliant!
But there is much more to it than just a few good words strung together. I know that Raka truly deserves this. :)
Well written... cheers...
Amazing is th word!! wht a poem. :)
lovely...
rake...u are a celeb !
tc
Oh how lovely!
only anwesa can write smthn like this!!! jus brilliant
@phoenix,
thanx dear!!!!i'v a lot to say but words fail me now...n yes,its my 2nd acrostic poem :D
@hemanth potluri,
thanx!!!!!
@bongal_rulz,
thanx...:)
@yamini,
thanx dear!!!!!
@richa,
thanx dear!!!!!
@luscious sealed lips,
thanx!!!!!!
@urv,
thanx!!!!!!!
@arv,
thanx!!!!!!!
@pallav,
thanx!!!!!
@harshita,
thanx dear!!!!!!
@arnab majumdar,
thanx!!!!
i wish i had words to tell all about raka..but alas! i'm short of words..
@ria,
thanx....
@oo7,
thanx...
@meera,
thanx!!!!!!
@mayz,
omg!!!!!!this comment made my lips arch into a billion dollar smile..
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