I wish i could just lie in a corner
waiting for death to come to me.
I wish i could cry my eyes out
and yell till the pain in me subsides.
I wish i could question god
"why me?"
I wish i could write my own destiny
and paint a pretty picture.
I wish i could just wake up one morning
to feel nothing anymore
I wish someday my memory fails me
and i dont remember any thing anymore.
I wish... how i wish...
25 comments:
wishes....we run after them but they manage to give us a slip..
i wish i could lessen your pain..how i wish...
me 1st n 2nd too...after a real long tym...
been there at times.. hope it passes soon :)
take care da...
Awww.. a very happy post previously. And a very sad one this time around. Life is a rollercoaster, no ? :(
anythin wud include me...u wanna frgt me too :(
waise y this post...given d recent developments i think v shud have some really happy posts from ya
hugssssssssssss!!!
hey no down down...
up up :)
I dunno about everything else but u sure can write your own destiny. Isnt that what u are doing right now? Now smile :)...come on...smile!!
i wish ur smile never leave ya, even for a random thought.
Raka, GET OUT OF MY HEAD!! lol
This is my lifes SONG as of right now. It was as if you picked out the words and perfectly put them together and formed a post!
Wonderful Writingssssssss...
Ne
is that how ms. soon-to-be-a-great-journalist is feeling right now?
sad one... but wonderfully conveyed.
i also wish to for the power to paint my own life, but reality doesnt always support you, does it?
nice post..
have a good week n always keep smiling :-)
Aww sweetheart, after such a celebration why such a morose poem? You ARE shaping your own path and you should be PROUD! Now cheer up! :)
*hugggg*
i never like the sad part..though we need to accept the fact of life...
Pallav
wht hpnd babe!? I thought tht u were happy, werent u??
After sucha big celebration, why do you WISH for all that?
Be happy, and write positive, feel positive.
*huuuug!*
I know the feeling sweetie....dont worry you will back to your chirpy self again!! :)
Hugs!!
I know the feeling sweetie....dont worry you will back to your chirpy self again!! :)
Hugs!!
I know the feeling sweetie....dont worry you will back to your chirpy self again!! :)
Hugs!!
keep wishing
in the mean time.. best wishes for blr journey
hope u get what u want...
an interesting though.... :)
First of all, CONGRATULATIONS! May God bless you and may you achieve all your dreams and live like you want to. :) Secondly, why such sad lines? If just a standalone piece, then I must say, a good job there and I really hope it's not a first person account. Take care girl, love you. :) God Bless. :)
simple somethings ..
I liked the way this poem conveys the anguish within..Nice writing.
Following you.
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