i see them putting up a facade
i see their fangs behind their smiles
their words can kill,
and stares can pierce.
they are there, everywhere,
in every walk of life.
hooded and dark
slipping in and out of shadows
they will intrude your mind
rape your thoughts
push you deeper into the dreary depths of nothingness
they will extract your everything
they will violate your very being.
i see their fangs behind their smiles
their words can kill,
and stares can pierce.
they are there, everywhere,
in every walk of life.
hooded and dark
slipping in and out of shadows
they will intrude your mind
rape your thoughts
push you deeper into the dreary depths of nothingness
they will extract your everything
they will violate your very being.
22 comments:
you scared me out of my wits girl!
brrrrrrrrrrr!!!
this is really terrific!
n someone who still shines amidst all such dark spirits is the phoenix rising from the ashes....
ah! darr gayi main... :( but poem is really really good...
wow...very ghotic hues dear..:)..excellently done:)...loved it
This is a bit creepy! Good though!!!
Ominous and suspenseful...a dark, yet intriguing read!
I believe "they" are the experts everyone use when they are trying to make a point as in "they say" I have always been sure "they" are ghosts and goblins and now you have exposed them
nice work
Oh they are out there, I used to be married to one. SCARY! Good job!
gosh....whats ur motive behind this scary post?? huh!
Ohh yes I have met them too. They are always out there waiting to build themselves up by knocking others down.
I absolutely love dark!
weeks trample on each other like magazines
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clever!
my!
well brought out emotion...
:)
liked it...
take care mate...
cheers...
good lord! i second Desi...
brrrr! dark Rakz... where'd this come from... right out of the blue!
whew!
They are masked!
masked...
i have to check my face :P
dara kyu rahi hai....uhh..
mai..bohoot tym baad tere blog pe aayi isliye??:P
they r the hypocrites...ever present, putting others down and trampling on them
nicely dun analogy!!!
Beautiful blog :)
beautiful!
Nicely penned
(hey whats yup with yaaa?)
beautiful :)
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