Will u believe me if I say-
"I understand"
will you care if I say-
"I will be there"
will you heed if I say
"you will be fine"
will you smile if I say
"there will be another tomorrow."
Will you reach out if I say
“I ll hold your hand”
Will you cry if I say
“I ll b gone some day?”
When I need you the most…
Will you be there?
If there is no tomorrow
Will you love me back?
If I say I love you?
Will you walk with me
A hundred miles
Your hand laced in mine
Into the golden sunset
In unhappiness or in bliss
In desolation or desperation?
21 comments:
Wowwwwww, very deep emotions in this poem.
WOWWWW! Great poem! lot of differents emotions in it!
luv the new layout! it's beautiful! but wats lovelier is the poem... its heart wrenching yet so so warm! :)
@nefty
thank you
@kaylee
you see nothing much good in me!:P
@ani
layout is by mandy...heck her out...she is in my list!
thanks btw :)
AM I Saying too many good things about you? is that what you are saying?
@kaylee
all im saying you are a good soul:D
oH OKAY,WELL IN THAT CASE,Thank you!I strive to be that way!
@kaylee
heheh i am sure u dont need to strive...
do u have a yahoo messenger or gtalk?cud we chat?my mail id is mail2raka@gmail.com
juite_raka@yahoo.co.in
I got aim..thats all.
did you see my latest post on my blog?
and i do have yahoo dont use it much though!
then why dont u go to meebo.com and log in yahoo and add me?we can chat
im being hopeful here....i ll check ur blog right away
are u on?
emotionless and still
she stood by the window engulfed in his presence
emotional and flitting
she had understood
the meaning of the clouds meeting
nice...
@rohit
:D
gosh! u r so much in love...
HI
i keep coming back and reading thi s over and over:)
wonderful poem :)
*hug*
peace & love
Jeevy
really liked this one..
very apt n amazingly written...
nice read !
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