Pulling the lapels of my jacket close
I make my way through the streets
As tears courses down my face
My heart wrenches and cries out
It over at last!
The pain will go away I
Consoled myself
Three years is a long time
So many memories…
So many dawns and sunsets!
Then one day the end came.
It had to I reasoned
It wasn’t worth the pain
He didn’t love me as much as I did
What now?
How do I survive?
I let the rain wash away my tears
I let it purge my soul and
Drown my fears
Yes there will be a tomorrow
And the phoenix will rise again!
13 comments:
My dearest friend! Now you are on a new path to a new adventure. The sky will brighten and the sun will shine on your face. Now true love can find its way to you. A big HUG to you. With all my love and support...
Cindy
anythings the matter, want to tell me
What happened?!
Any problems!??!
U can share it wid me, if u want.
peace & love
JeeVY
@everyone
i am totally fine..was in a depressed mode..hence such a pathetic attempt at writing poetry,please donut worry :D....
Hi dear,
Lovely words...The phoenix will rise again definetly..
Hey, thanks for complimenting my blog..and its my pleasure that you want to blogroll me..
Thanks..
Take care..
wow goood poetic verse well written
@shreuti
gee thank you
@protegeoflife
thankx :)
shit! that's so bad! a biiiig hug for you, mate! take care!
well what u read above is my initial reaction:p! after reading your message to the public about it being raka composing poetry (and hopefully nothing serious?!), all i have to say is that it had the desired effect! good job:D
@steve
heheh....gotcha!
Pathetic attempt?!?! :O
That is really good, why do u feel so!! *Staring with anger*
peace & love
JeeVY
well whatever it may be...ur pathetic attempt or ur reflected depression??
was a gud post and a blog worth visiting... :)
Gud luck...
well dune.
nice verse!
sharad
@rajeev
blush blush
@jeya
aww thankx :)
@sharad
thankx pal...
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